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Massacres and mysterious disappearings are occuring in the Kabyle mountain regions of Algeria by a dangerous beast. A professional hunter is engaged by authorities to track down the creature and eliminate it, he will soon realize the task won’t be as simple as his previous achievements.
"When he's hired to track down a mysterious beast who has been terrorizing the people of the Kabyle mountains, a professional hunter soon finds the tables turned when he and his crew become the hunted."
“When he’s hired to track down a mysterious beast who has been terrorizing the people of the Kabyle mountains, a professional hunter soon finds the tables turned when he and his crew become the hunted.”
See lessAfter a health scare, a middle-aged widower decides to get back in the dating game for the first time in twenty years – but soon finds romance blossoming with his friend’s daughter.
"When he falls for his best friend's daughter, a middle-aged man who hasn't dated in years, tries to navigate the relationship without losing his best friend in the process."---------------------------------------------------------------------1: I started with the forward story instead of the back sRead more
“When he falls for his best friend’s daughter, a middle-aged man who hasn’t dated in years, tries to navigate the relationship without losing his best friend in the process.”
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1: I started with the forward story instead of the back story.
2: I also added ‘best’ friend because it gives the lead something to lose. Now the steaks are even higher.
3: Because it’s his best friends daughter; it’s possible if the lead continues with this relationship with the daughter, he might lose his best friend, (Perhaps the one who helped him through the last 20 years) but at the same time, he doesn’t want to lose the new relationship. So he has to walk a tightrope where he tries to continue the relationship but also tries to maintain his friendship. (Then you add obstacles in the way of the lead character)
btw great concept
See lessWhen a little girls father kills her mother before killing himself, she must convince her Sunday school teacher that she has seen GOD
If you give us a 'must', you must give us an 'or else'; or else the logline will seem incomplete"After the murder-suicide of her parents, a traumatized girl must convince her Sunday school teacher she has seen God, or else..." (This bad thing will happen)
If you give us a ‘must’, you must give us an ‘or else’; or else the logline will seem incomplete
“After the murder-suicide of her parents, a traumatized girl must convince her Sunday school teacher she has seen God, or else…” (This bad thing will happen)
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