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A lonely and conflicted gay teenager learns to accept himself and take pride in who he is with the help of an unlikely friend who introduces him to the world of boxing
Thank you - loads to work on, lots to think about. The crowd funder goes live mid-July. The shoot is scheduled for 4 days in September. I shall keep you posted! Rowe : )
Thank you – loads to work on, lots to think about.
The crowd funder goes live mid-July. The shoot is scheduled for 4 days in September.
I shall keep you posted!
Rowe : )
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Hi Libari, I have to admit there's a lot to digest there at first read. Lets have a look... INTENTION - conceal a wish-granting treasure. OBSTACLE - the King who hired him to find it will use it to become an all-powerful tyrant. A sellsword sets out to destroy a wish-granting treasure when he findsRead more
Hi Libari,
I have to admit there’s a lot to digest there at first read.
Lets have a look…
INTENTION – conceal a wish-granting treasure.
OBSTACLE – the King who hired him to find it will use it to become an all-powerful tyrant.
A sellsword sets out to destroy a wish-granting treasure when he finds out his land’s king will use it to become an all-powerful tryant.
– “conceal” felt soft to me. Less of a challenge. Treasure sounds dangerous and “ring-like” if he sets out to destroy it.
– wasn’t sure how necessary “mysterious traveler” is to the logline.
– for less words I got rid of “cynical” as well – though it does suggest the character’s potential arc. Keep it for now I imagine.
Anyways – good luck with this!
See lessFour mentally ill college students must race against time to stop their professor from being murdered by a mob boss.
There are definitely elements here, but you have left out the inciting incident. Why is the Mob boss going to kill their professor?
There are definitely elements here, but you have left out the inciting incident. Why is the Mob boss going to kill their professor?
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