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  1. Posted: July 28, 2023In: Crime

    A wide eyed bullied suburban housewife who walks into the robbery homicide of a loan shark must evade being hunted by both sides of the law to protect her family.

    JC Miller Penpusher
    Added an answer on July 29, 2023 at 3:05 am

    I like, but I'm distracted by wide eyed bullied. Maybe: An innocent suburban housewife walks in on the robbery homicide of a loan shark and now must evade being hunted by both sides of the law to protect her family.

    I like, but I’m distracted by wide eyed bullied.
    Maybe:
    An innocent suburban housewife walks in on the robbery homicide of a loan shark and now must evade being hunted by both sides of the law to protect her family.

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  2. Posted: July 28, 2023In: SciFi

    After they were executed for their crimes, and instead of waking up in the afterlife, the eight found themselves on a ship that had anchored in the middle of the sea. The ship slipped into a whirlpool that took them to the shore of an island, where they saw horrors.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on July 28, 2023 at 9:29 am

    At this point, you have a premise but not yet a story. (At least by the logline) To turn the premise into a story, you need a lead character, with a goal, and something standing in the way of that goal. The premise sounds interesting. Now it just needs an equally compelling lead character.

    At this point, you have a premise but not yet a story. (At least by the logline)
    To turn the premise into a story, you need a lead character, with a goal, and something standing in the way of that goal.
    The premise sounds interesting.
    Now it just needs an equally compelling lead character.

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  3. Posted: December 22, 2022In: Action

    When a struggling Chinese-American laundromat owner discovers she can “verse-jump” between parallel universes, she must defend her family, her business, and the multiverse itself from a vengeful woman with god-like powers who seeks to destroy everything.

    JC Miller Penpusher
    Added an answer on July 28, 2023 at 4:57 am

    I definitely feel like I've seen this before... but with a really good twist.

    I definitely feel like I’ve seen this before… but with a really good twist.

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