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  1. Posted: August 2, 2023In: Drama

    When an ambitious yet struggling young man attempts yet another get-rich-quick scheme against the wishes of his family, things rapidly escalate in all the wrong directions as he realizes all the money he’s just lost in the stock market was drug money demanded to be repaid, the same day.

    NisVinten Logliner
    Added an answer on August 3, 2023 at 4:19 pm

    The thing about get rich scheme caught my attention. We all know that type of person. But I am curious - what is the main relation in this movie. Finding that relation and adding it to the logline I think would help. You have your action line. But what is the relationship line? Also curious about whRead more

    The thing about get rich scheme caught my attention. We all know that type of person.
    But I am curious – what is the main relation in this movie. Finding that relation and adding it to the logline I think would help.
    You have your action line. But what is the relationship line?
    Also curious about who is the main opponent.. is it the drug dealers or his parents?

    All the best!
    Nis

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  2. Posted: July 27, 2023In: Action

    “After his town is swarmed by the evil undead, a shy gamer, and his friends must use their gaming skills to save his brother stranded on the other side of town.” -Zombie Death Kill-

    Odie Samurai
    Added an answer on August 2, 2023 at 2:14 am

    Are we talking about D&D or Call of Duty (COD) gamers? Since I didn't know, I used "savvy squad" to describe COD gamers. If they are D&D players, you can substitute them with "guild." I also assumed the brother was scouting. In a town encircled by the undead and fallout shelters, a shy teenRead more

    Are we talking about D&D or Call of Duty (COD) gamers? Since I didn’t know, I used “savvy squad” to describe COD gamers. If they are D&D players, you can substitute them with “guild.” I also assumed the brother was scouting.

    In a town encircled by the undead and fallout shelters, a shy teen and his [savvy squad] must use their gaming skills to rescue his brother on a scouting mission gone wrong.

    Good stuff! Make this yours – keep going!

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  3. Posted: July 28, 2023In: Crime

    A wide eyed bullied suburban housewife who walks into the robbery homicide of a loan shark must evade being hunted by both sides of the law to protect her family.

    JC Miller Penpusher
    Added an answer on July 29, 2023 at 3:05 am

    I like, but I'm distracted by wide eyed bullied. Maybe: An innocent suburban housewife walks in on the robbery homicide of a loan shark and now must evade being hunted by both sides of the law to protect her family.

    I like, but I’m distracted by wide eyed bullied.
    Maybe:
    An innocent suburban housewife walks in on the robbery homicide of a loan shark and now must evade being hunted by both sides of the law to protect her family.

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