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In the aftermath of a high school shooting, a young popular teacher blames himself for failing to prevent it.
Agree with Mike. The teacher blames himself for the shooting, but you want to picture a story in your logline, not just a scene or two. The main conflict of your protagonist, along with his goal (goal and main conflict should be intertwined) are not mentioned in your version yet. He blames himself fRead more
Agree with Mike. The teacher blames himself for the shooting, but you want to picture a story in your logline, not just a scene or two. The main conflict of your protagonist, along with his goal (goal and main conflict should be intertwined) are not mentioned in your version yet.
He blames himself for the shooting. Why? And what does he do about it? What’s happening in the aftermath of this tragedy? Is there are a trial?
Key elements are still missing.
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Story is conflict, and conflict from a story standpoint is what is standing between the lead character accomplishing his or her goal. Since your logline doesn't tell us what the lead character's goal is, we, the reader, do not know what the conflict is, which means we do not know what the story is aRead more
Story is conflict, and conflict from a story standpoint is what is standing between the lead character accomplishing his or her goal. Since your logline doesn’t tell us what the lead character’s goal is, we, the reader, do not know what the conflict is, which means we do not know what the story is about.
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Unfortunately, I missed this post. But I'm happy reading it now. Like the premise and your logline pitches a great story. To be honest, I didn't know this movie. Not my times, but I will check it out. Thanks :) Also, it's crazy, like you said: they started the project without having the full story.Read more
Unfortunately, I missed this post.
See lessBut I’m happy reading it now.
Like the premise and your logline pitches a great story.
To be honest, I didn’t know this movie. Not my times, but I will check it out. Thanks 🙂
Also, it’s crazy, like you said: they started the project without having the full story. This says something about the power of a fantastic premise.
Fonda and Redford? What a duo!