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Hey guys, I shot a short film and need a little help on my logline. It’s been bothering me for months! It’s a romantic comedy. Short film. Do any of you have any suggestions on cleaning it up? Would love any help I could get. Thanks guys. “After burying themselves in their work and away from their friends, Two broken-hearted Twenty somethings are taken for a night out by their respective friends, only to cross paths over a game of pool, and falling for each other in the process.”
Great work, Richiev! I like your new version "...over a game of pool with emotional stakes higher than the winning shot." It raises the stakes quite literally and it also adds a mysterious flavour to your romantic story. Are you going to shoot the film by yourself? Well, your logline is working now!
Great work, Richiev!
I like your new version “…over a game of pool with emotional stakes higher than the winning shot.”
It raises the stakes quite literally and it also adds a mysterious flavour to your romantic story.
Are you going to shoot the film by yourself? Well, your logline is working now!
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