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  1. Posted: June 1, 2020In: Comedy

    An uptight corporate couple, despondent their once spontaneous relationship has become joyless in the single-minded pursuit of starting a family, attempt to save their marriage by impulsively buying a run-down ski resort in rural Tasmania.

    Odie Samurai
    Added an answer on June 4, 2020 at 8:20 am

    Very cool, gives me a “We Bought a Zoo” vibe – here are my thoughts. “despondent their once spontaneous relationship has become joyless in the single-minded pursuit of starting a family” I had to re-read this a couple of times to get it. From an American standpoint, you do not need to add “rural” whRead more

    Very cool, gives me a “We Bought a Zoo” vibe – here are my thoughts.

    • “despondent their once spontaneous relationship has become joyless in the single-minded pursuit of starting a family” I had to re-read this a couple of times to get it.
    • From an American standpoint, you do not need to add “rural” when referring to Tasmania – it is already baked in the name ?.

    Questions:
    1. Are they newlyweds?
    2. What are their professions?
    3. What are the reasons why they cannot start a family?
    4. Where were they located when purchasing the resort?

    My current take:
    An XXX power-couple XXX impulse buys a run-down Tasmanian ski resort in hopes of rebuilding their joyless marriage XXX.

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  2. Posted: October 11, 2019In: Coming of Age

    When she allows her husband’s overdose, a neglectful young mother must embark on a journey of recovery or risk losing her children to the system forever.

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    HannahB Penpusher
    Added an answer on June 1, 2020 at 12:11 pm

    I would suggest adding urgency or a timeframe for losing her children.? Like a court date or an order from the court.

    I would suggest adding urgency or a timeframe for losing her children.? Like a court date or an order from the court.

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  3. Posted: April 30, 2020In: Drama

    A talented lonely man falls in love with his soulmate but everyday fighting brings out her past and his imaginary future.

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    HannahB Penpusher
    Added an answer on June 1, 2020 at 12:03 pm

    I'm assuming" her past" means she had a traumatic past? Is that the conflict. Because of her past they can't achieve the future he has envisaged? If this is the case then maybe it's her story. She needs to overcome her fears for them to be happy.

    I’m assuming” her past” means she had a traumatic past? Is that the conflict. Because of her past they can’t achieve the future he has envisaged? If this is the case then maybe it’s her story. She needs to overcome her fears for them to be happy.

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