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  1. Posted: April 6, 2020In: Horror

    After receiving a private invite to compete,? five amateur cooks find themselves trapped by elite cannibals and must cook to win in order to survive.

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    Added an answer on April 8, 2020 at 6:52 am

    As dpg asked, what are the details involved with not surviving? Perhaps its a competition with stages, and the loser becomes the main ingredient for the next dish, only the participants don't realize it at first. To me this idea would work well as a slow reveal, Jordan Peele type story. I like the pRead more

    As dpg asked, what are the details involved with not surviving? Perhaps its a competition with stages, and the loser becomes the main ingredient for the next dish, only the participants don’t realize it at first.

    To me this idea would work well as a slow reveal, Jordan Peele type story. I like the premise a lot!

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  2. Posted: April 4, 2020In: Comedy, Examples

    A neurotic actor, struggling to perform in a Chekhov play, has his soul temporarily extracted and rents a Russian one. Success– rave reviews! Now he must find and reclaim his soul which has been stolen and implanted in someone else.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on April 7, 2020 at 12:58 am

    As I indicated, this is not an easy film to logline. I originally thought only to post a logline with the story hook.? Just the 1st sentence that lays down the set up: A neurotic actor, struggling to perform in a Chekhov play, has his soul temporarily extracted and rents a Russian one. The 2nd senteRead more

    As I indicated, this is not an easy film to logline. I originally thought only to post a logline with the story hook.? Just the 1st sentence that lays down the set up:

    A neurotic actor, struggling to perform in a Chekhov play, has his soul temporarily extracted and rents a Russian one.

    The 2nd sentence refers to the MPR moment.

    Actually, the first sentence doesn’t really convey how the plot unfolds.? Here’s the sequence of plot beats:

    1]INITIAL SITUATION: the actor is floundering in rehearsals to play Uncle Vanya.
    2]INCITING INCIDENT: At tip from his agent about a New Yorker article on soul extraction directs him to a consultation.
    3] DEBATE AND INDECISION: After learning more and overcoming his doubts and concerns…
    4]END OF ACT ONE: He crosses the threshold, has his ineffectual soul extracted and stored.

    5]BUT (complication):? Not having a soul to put into the role only makes his performance worse.
    6] In desperation, he rents the soul of a female Russian poet.
    7] Now he’s able to give a soulful performance. Success!
    8]BUT (complication): he develops an allergic reaction: the Russian poet’s soul is too great to dwell in a mediocre person such as the actor.? So he must return it and regain his own soul.
    9]MPR:? He goes to retrieve his soul from storage, discovers it’s gone.

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  3. Posted: April 6, 2020In: Drama

    An alluring Irish banker who is terminally ill must race against time to convince her ex-boyfriend and American baseball star that her 10-year-old daughter is his.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on April 7, 2020 at 12:23 am

    Why? So she convinces him, then what?? What is her end-of-life, end game, her ultimate objective?? Isn't it to get the guy to adopt her? These days it's relatively easy to establish paternity by a DNA test.? Even if he refuses to submit to a DNA test, she can covertly obtain a DNA sample by, say, saRead more

    Why? So she convinces him, then what?? What is her end-of-life, end game, her ultimate objective?? Isn’t it to get the guy to adopt her?

    These days it’s relatively easy to establish paternity by a DNA test.? Even if he refuses to submit to a DNA test, she can covertly obtain a DNA sample by, say, saliva on a cup or bottle the guy discards.? Cops do it all the time.? And being a banker, isn’t she rich enough to be able to hire a PI to do just that?

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