1. Posted: April 2, 2020In:

    When his former lover is killed, an immortal cowboy rises from the dead teams up with a teenage girl to kill those are responsible.

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    If he's immortal maybe he's facing a gang of outlaw ghost bandits? Like someone said above, being immortal leaves him with no adversaries. Unless they are immortal too. Also, what about the teenage girl he teams up with? Why she would join him? Or maybe she has a special power - sees dead people, foRead more

    If he’s immortal maybe he’s facing a gang of outlaw ghost bandits? Like someone said above, being immortal leaves him with no adversaries. Unless they are immortal too.

    Also, what about the teenage girl he teams up with? Why she would join him? Or maybe she has a special power – sees dead people, for instance.

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  2. Posted: November 15, 2019In:

    When his family is terrorised by the ghost of a killer, a man sets out to confront the ghost, an old foe, bent on avenging his death.

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    I like this one. Reminds me of 'Cape Fear' but with a ghost twist. Also 'Shocker', that Wes Craven's 80's B-movie about a serial killer's spirit using electric power to kill. I imagine being a ghost gives the killer a couple of advantages (invisibility, teleportation, and so on). I'd like to see whaRead more

    I like this one. Reminds me of ‘Cape Fear’ but with a ghost twist. Also ‘Shocker’, that Wes Craven’s 80’s B-movie about a serial killer’s spirit using electric power to kill.

    I imagine being a ghost gives the killer a couple of advantages (invisibility, teleportation, and so on). I’d like to see what kind of things the family man would do to stop him.

    But is the ghost only looking for vengeance? Maybe the family man did something horrible to him and kept it in secret. That would put him in jeopardy with his family also. I don’t know, maybe the ghost was a business associate and got betrayed and killed by the family man to get his share of the company. I think the lead character’s contradiction would add depth to him and the story as a whole.

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  3. Posted: April 4, 2020In:

    When a young law clerk is pursued by the police because his senior partner has implicated him in a criminal enterprise he must embroil his boss in the crime to save himself.

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    Not sure a job is a good enough goal - if he loses his job, he'll get another one - not nice but not too bad, especially today when so many people are losing their jobs... Is there a stakes character you could bring in to the story?

    Not sure a job is a good enough goal – if he loses his job, he’ll get another one – not nice but not too bad, especially today when so many people are losing their jobs…

    Is there a stakes character you could bring in to the story?

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