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After noticing the same stranger at yet another suicide, a novice detective sets out to prove his claims before she incites another tragedy
A novice detective must identify the stranger he notices at numerous suicide scenes and prove she is linked to the deaths before she strikes again.Although it may be better to already know who the stranger is? ?The IMDB logline for Basic Instinct is: ?"A violent police detective investigates a brutaRead more
A novice detective must identify the stranger he notices at numerous suicide scenes and prove she is linked to the deaths before she strikes again.
Although it may be better to already know who the stranger is? ?The IMDB logline for Basic Instinct is: ?”A violent police detective investigates a brutal murder that might involve a manipulative and seductive novelist.”
A novice detective investigates a series of suicides that might involve a brazen stranger seen at each crime scene.
I’m much better at critiquing that actually coming up with loglines! LOL
P.S. ?I’m not sure that NLP is sexy enough to incite suicide! ?It’s pretty outdated and discredited scientifically – maybe have her a psychiatrist/hypnotist/cult leader/counsellor?
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See lessTitle: Curse Genre: Anthology Drama Series Logline: “In early 1800s America, an African slave is granted immortality and fights against the injustice facing the black community through the centuries as a vigilante. Pilot Logline: After a slave is revived from the dead, he struggles to free the other slaves and kill his manipulative plantation owner.
As variable suggested.He's immortal.? He's a SJW with decades to fight slavery, to learn from his mistakes and failures,? to try, try , and try again.? And he can't instigate one successful slave rebellion before the Civil War?? Not one?Not credible even as make-believe, wishful-thinking-history. NoRead more
As variable suggested.
He’s immortal.? He’s a SJW with decades to fight slavery, to learn from his mistakes and failures,? to try, try , and try again.? And he can’t instigate one successful slave rebellion before the Civil War?? Not one?
Not credible even as make-believe, wishful-thinking-history. Not believable given how history actually played out.
If you want an audience to suspend disbelief and buy into the the premise, then the super-awesome protagonist, needs to fight a super-awesome antagonist, someone with equal power but opposite motives. A? SJW needs? a nemesis, should face seemingly insurmountable and believable obstacles.
fwiw
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