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A total loser works for a ruthless Vegas casino boss to jinx gamblers. But after he falls in love with a cocktail waitress, gamblers become winners instead. Now he must save his Lady Luck from the boss’s murderous wrath.
I think your version is pretty good. One sentence makes it clunky; this is as far as I could get-When love debuffs his jinx, a hapless employee must save his lady from the ruthless casino boss
I think your version is pretty good. One sentence makes it clunky; this is as far as I could get-
See lessWhen love debuffs his jinx, a hapless employee must save his lady from the ruthless casino boss
A woman at a crossroads in her life finally decides to go see a therapist and discovers how the natural and the supernatural world collide.
What is the lead character's goal? What is standing in the lead character's way?
What is the lead character’s goal?
What is standing in the lead character’s way?
See lessA young man accepts the body switch offered from a cult member in order to start a run away from his pregnant girlfriend and start a new life. Little did he knows that the new body requires constant supplies of human hearts. Meanwhile, his old body replaced him at home as cult members have their own plans with his girlfriend.
learning that ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? he must his new body needs a? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?go ask to be returned fresh supply of blood? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?to his old self the cult members have their? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?save heRead more
learning that ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? he must
fresh supply of blood? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?to his old self
own plans with his girlfriend
the first set of inciting incident -> objective goal is what I suggest you go for in the logline-
After realizing that his new body requires an endless supply of fresh blood, a man must seek out the operators to reclaim his old body (25 Words)
The through line with his girlfriend becomes an added complication, to the fact that the cult members are not interested in the re-switch, which is all pretty good for the script,
See lessbut makes the logline harder to read- Returning to reclaim his old body, when a young man learns that his operators are trying to sacrifice his girlfriend, a commitment-phobic man must save her (27 Words) (not recommended)