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A pizza delivery driver that resents Superheroes, is inadvertently stuck protecting one when the worlds greatest supervillain arrives in his city during a typical afternoon shift.
I'd study "The Boys" the TV show to make sure your premise isn't too similar to it. It's also a guy who hates superheroes because they accidentaly killed his girlfirend, and in the end he grows a connection with one of them despite it.
I’d study “The Boys” the TV show to make sure your premise isn’t too similar to it. It’s also a guy who hates superheroes because they accidentaly killed his girlfirend, and in the end he grows a connection with one of them despite it.
See lessA young graduate, struggling to have a career as a photo-journalist but stuck without job prospects receives a call from a mysterious hacker organisation that wants to recruit him as their man in the field. He works for them while he tries to figure out what their ultimate goal is and confronts his opposing family.
agreed, needs to be way less wordy.
agreed, needs to be way less wordy.
See lessA? newcomer in New York City,? befriends a lovely housewife who’s harboring a dark secret from them.
The criminals pale in comparison to the aliens, so best to only describe the aliens in the logline. The criminals may play out in the script, but they're not adding enough value to warrant being described in the logline. Why two main characters? Unless you have an odd couple buddy story, it would beRead more
The criminals pale in comparison to the aliens, so best to only describe the aliens in the logline. The criminals may play out in the script, but they’re not adding enough value to warrant being described in the logline.
Why two main characters? Unless you have an odd couple buddy story, it would be better to specify one main character.
Also, ss being led by a Russian gang leader a bad thing? If so, it doesn’t come across as such in the logline. What about the Russian gang leader makes her a problem?
Lastly, how is the gang leader’s sex relevant?
Whether female or male, the Russian gangster character will still fulfill the same role (the role is unclear in the logline, but that’s beside the point). Therefore, as every word in a logline counts, and as that description doesn’t inform the story, it should be cut out or changed.
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