Lost your password? Please enter your email address. You will receive a link and will create a new password via email.
Please briefly explain why you feel this question should be reported.
Please briefly explain why you feel this answer should be reported.
Please briefly explain why you feel this user should be reported.
A troubled playboy, confronting the emptiness of his life, spends the weekend with his fiancee’s family, and falls for her stepmother – a woman afraid of love.
Sounds good! We could use some location about where that family lives or where do they meet, so we can get a quick idea of what kind of famiy that is or what scenery and locations the film would display. Ex: "an Indiana family", "a rich Manhattan family", "a serious Swiss family",...
Sounds good! We could use some location about where that family lives or where do they meet, so we can get a quick idea of what kind of famiy that is or what scenery and locations the film would display. Ex: “an Indiana family”, “a rich Manhattan family”, “a serious Swiss family”,…
See lessWhen a cursed camera captures pictures of predestined murders, a cakera collector must unravel mysteries of the occult device to stop her husband’s gruesome fate.
It?s a very solid re-work so major kudos on that. To start, I would flip the two parts of the logline. ?Set the characters and the inciting incident at the beginning (she sees the death through the camera) and then get into the stakes/Why the action is worth writing a whole script about. I also secoRead more
It?s a very solid re-work so major kudos on that.
To start, I would flip the two parts of the logline. ?Set the characters and the inciting incident at the beginning (she sees the death through the camera) and then get into the stakes/Why the action is worth writing a whole script about.
I also second dpg, make sure you are specifc on what the camera can actually do. ?Is it a camera that causes/sets death in motion like the video in The Ring or does it predict the circumstances around death like the pictures taken in Final Destination 3?
See lessAn amnesiac warrior woman with a mysterious, magical tattoo that compels her to do things against her will teams up with a band of eccentric comrades on a quest to uncover the secret of her markings.
You could make her act upon the discovery of what the tattoo makes her do, that would make her proactive?
You could make her act upon the discovery of what the tattoo makes her do, that would make her proactive?
See less