1. Posted: January 14, 2020In:

    The son of a Nigerian Genocide warlord moves in with a Suburban American family to fulfill his fathers dying wish but the secrets of his old and new family threaten to send him back home to a life of psychological imprisonment.

    Han_Heya Logliner

    I like the first half of this but I'm lost when you add 'life of psychological imprisonment'. Why would his life be like that?

    I like the first half of this but I’m lost when you add ‘life of psychological imprisonment’. Why would his life be like that?

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  2. Posted: January 18, 2020In:

    After having a freak accident during a baseball game, high school students must use their superpowers to stop their enemies from invading their town.

    Han_Heya Logliner

    I think the freak accident thing is overplayed. Also, were there enemies before the freak accident or did they just randomly show up?

    I think the freak accident thing is overplayed. Also, were there enemies before the freak accident or did they just randomly show up?

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  3. Posted: February 7, 2020In:

    In a future post-apocalypse society, where reproduction is only for ?the worthy?, a young woman chosen for reproduction must convince her leaders to spare her life after announcing that she doesn?t want to have children.

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    Thanks all, very interesting. I especially the new twist proposed by pdlz78---about limiting men for procreation to avoid "aggressive" rulers in the future. Will give more thought to everything---appreciate the comments.!!

    Thanks all, very interesting. I especially the new twist proposed by pdlz78—about limiting men for procreation to avoid “aggressive” rulers in the future. Will give more thought to everything—appreciate the comments.!!

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