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“After his town is swarmed by the evil undead, a shy gamer, and his friends must use their gaming skills to save his brother stranded on the other side of town.” -Zombie Death Kill-
Are we talking about D&D or Call of Duty (COD) gamers? Since I didn't know, I used "savvy squad" to describe COD gamers. If they are D&D players, you can substitute them with "guild." I also assumed the brother was scouting. In a town encircled by the undead and fallout shelters, a shy teenRead more
Are we talking about D&D or Call of Duty (COD) gamers? Since I didn’t know, I used “savvy squad” to describe COD gamers. If they are D&D players, you can substitute them with “guild.” I also assumed the brother was scouting.
In a town encircled by the undead and fallout shelters, a shy teen and his [savvy squad] must use their gaming skills to rescue his brother on a scouting mission gone wrong.
Good stuff! Make this yours – keep going!
See lessA wide eyed bullied suburban housewife who walks into the robbery homicide of a loan shark must evade being hunted by both sides of the law to protect her family.
I like, but I'm distracted by wide eyed bullied. Maybe: An innocent suburban housewife walks in on the robbery homicide of a loan shark and now must evade being hunted by both sides of the law to protect her family.
I like, but I’m distracted by wide eyed bullied.
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An innocent suburban housewife walks in on the robbery homicide of a loan shark and now must evade being hunted by both sides of the law to protect her family.
After they were executed for their crimes, and instead of waking up in the afterlife, the eight found themselves on a ship that had anchored in the middle of the sea. The ship slipped into a whirlpool that took them to the shore of an island, where they saw horrors.
At this point, you have a premise but not yet a story. (At least by the logline) To turn the premise into a story, you need a lead character, with a goal, and something standing in the way of that goal. The premise sounds interesting. Now it just needs an equally compelling lead character.
At this point, you have a premise but not yet a story. (At least by the logline)
See lessTo turn the premise into a story, you need a lead character, with a goal, and something standing in the way of that goal.
The premise sounds interesting.
Now it just needs an equally compelling lead character.