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When an avid lens collector takes a photo with a mysterious camera, he is captured in a murder he can only hope to escape.
Ok. After the help of all of those that posted on this one and with a little help from my partner, we revised the logline and? both feel it is a good fit. When a possessed camera converts an innocent portrait into a depiction of predestined murder, a camera collector must resist fate to saveRead more
Ok. After the help of all of those that posted on this one and with a little help from my partner, we revised the logline and? both feel it is a good fit.
When a possessed camera converts an innocent portrait into a depiction of predestined murder, a camera collector must resist fate to save her lover’s life.
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Agree with dpg. Specificity is often the key to a good logline. Having a very clear understanding of the plot (at least until the midpoint or end of act II) is essential. Since the message here is going to be about vanity I imagine, it's worth telling us specifically what is corrupted and then whatRead more
Agree with dpg.
Specificity is often the key to a good logline. Having a very clear understanding of the plot (at least until the midpoint or end of act II) is essential. Since the message here is going to be about vanity I imagine, it’s worth telling us specifically what is corrupted and then what she plans to do about it. This is potentially just the inciting incident. The corruption appears as she walks back into school first day back, and that’s the perfect Act I break. Entering the upside-down world. ?But what happens next?
Interesting though. Stick with it! I love a good high school coming of age film and this, as dpg has said, is certainly a topical subject.
See lessAfter her family is killed, a young woman escapes in order to avoid the same fate only to discover a family secret that will soon have her running back home in order to confront those who hurt her family.
The only question I have is, escapes what? Running back home doesn't tell me that was the place she escaped. Plus hurt her family seems a weak description for killing.? You could use "those responsible", saves words. I look forward to reading a rewrite is you post one.
The only question I have is, escapes what?
Running back home doesn’t tell me that was the place she escaped.
Plus hurt her family seems a weak description for killing.? You could use “those responsible”, saves words.
I look forward to reading a rewrite is you post one.
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