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A wheelchair-bound girl must learn to use her physical abilities to save herself and friends from a pack of female zombies.
I think your concept is good, the logline, as expressed by Danzig does need a little workI would say a movie about a woman learning to use her physical abilities seems weird, Maybe she searches youtube, "How to use Physical abilities" then goes to the library and checks out a book on learning physicRead more
I think your concept is good, the logline, as expressed by Danzig does need a little work
I would say a movie about a woman learning to use her physical abilities seems weird, Maybe she searches youtube, “How to use Physical abilities” then goes to the library and checks out a book on learning physical abilities. After that maybe she takes a class, finally after learning to use her abilities in the third act she saves the day.
Instead, I would focus on what she actually must do.
This is just an example yours would be different:
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“When the zombie apocalypse lands smackdab in her small town, a wheelchair-bound radio aficionado and her friends must trek up the local mountain and send out a zombie-killing radio wave in order to save the world from the brain-eating freaks.”
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Why MUST she dance with her old crush??? What's are the stakes?? What is lost if she refuses to dance with him?
Why MUST she dance with her old crush??? What’s are the stakes?? What is lost if she refuses to dance with him?
See lessA British Gangster who is dying flies to the States, with his gang?s money, to see the old West in search of a perfect end to his once violent career.
If, as Richiev suggests, he wants to go out with an old fashioned Western shootout, the logline needs to say so.? Like:A British Gangster dying of cancer seeks the perfect end to his violent career: a shootout at the O.K. Corral in Tombstone, Arizona.
If, as Richiev suggests, he wants to go out with an old fashioned Western shootout, the logline needs to say so.? Like:
A British Gangster dying of cancer seeks the perfect end to his violent career: a shootout at the O.K. Corral in Tombstone, Arizona.
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