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When he discovers that his job is killing him, a shy kitchen hand must tell his sleazy boss that he needs to quit.
Revised version: When he discovers that his job is killing him, a cowardly kitchenhand must muster the courage to tell his sleazy boss that he needs to quit.
Revised version:
When he discovers that his job is killing him, a cowardly kitchenhand must muster the courage to tell his sleazy boss that he needs to quit.
See lessWhen the identity of a missing girl is reported to be the niece of the head of the CCTV department, she must review the footage to uncover the mystery behind her niece’s disappearance.
That she just must review the footage to figure out the mystery don't feel like a big enough "must". what are the stakes? what happens if she don't figure it out. if you can see it on the tapes the movie will be over very fast. just some thoughts.
That she just must review the footage to figure out the mystery don’t feel like a big enough “must”. what are the stakes? what happens if she don’t figure it out. if you can see it on the tapes the movie will be over very fast. just some thoughts.
See lessWhen Katie’s distant father stays over to look after her, she must learn to reconnect with him in order to salvage their relationship.
Is there something in their way that might affect her goal?
Is there something in their way that might affect her goal?
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