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When sinister agents abduct him and his mother, an exceptionally gifted but socially isolated Indian teen discovers that he was genetically engineered for a dark purpose and must choose to either embrace that purpose or fight back on behalf of humanity.
If you had to carve this down, it would be... When his mother is abducted by sinister agents, a teenage loner must fight back on behalf of humanity. - So we're missing some stakes/what happens if he doesn't fight back. Those guys above are right. I think you need to write down a few pages on your thRead more
If you had to carve this down, it would be…
When his mother is abducted by sinister agents, a teenage loner must fight back on behalf of humanity.
– So we’re missing some stakes/what happens if he doesn’t fight back.
Those guys above are right. I think you need to write down a few pages on your thing, what it’s about, what will or could happen. It will give you a better understanding of what’s going on.
After that the logline will be a lot more precise and specific. You’ll be able to carve it down – and then it will look really fucking good.
Good luck.
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I'm not sure what the story is, as the plot is unclear. What is the inciting event? What is his primary action? And most importantly, what is his specific goal?
I’m not sure what the story is, as the plot is unclear.
What is the inciting event? What is his primary action? And most importantly, what is his specific goal?
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Hi darkhorse, The logline makes me want to ask questions. Why are they sworn enemies? Why, if only one of them is accused, are they both fighting off the locals?
Hi darkhorse,
See lessThe logline makes me want to ask questions. Why are they sworn enemies? Why, if only one of them is accused, are they both fighting off the locals?