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Trapped in his old hometown during a snowstorm, a charming con artist must spend Christmas with a dysfunctional family ? and unexpectedly finds the family he never had.
Just so you know, there is a very similar Nicholas Cage movie called "Trapped in Paradise"I don't think it will make too much of a difference, and your movie will be able to stand on its own, but you should know it's out there.
Just so you know, there is a very similar Nicholas Cage movie called “Trapped in Paradise”
I don’t think it will make too much of a difference, and your movie will be able to stand on its own, but you should know it’s out there.
See lessWhen a charming con artist settles down with a sweet yet gullible woman, he must spend Christmas with her dysfunctional family – and unexpectedly experiences the concept of family for the first time.
In your last logline, it looks like you gave away the ending, something a logline should never do. Beyond that problem, where is the conflict? Since the con artist is the MC, the conflict within the dysfunctional family does not count. The logline needs to tell us what conflict involves the MC. If tRead more
In your last logline, it looks like you gave away the ending, something a logline should never do.
Beyond that problem, where is the conflict? Since the con artist is the MC, the conflict within the dysfunctional family does not count. The logline needs to tell us what conflict involves the MC. If the MC is simply observing the conflict, then he is not the MC. (In the “Great Gatsby” Carraway narrates the story, but Gatsby is the MC as he drives the major conflict.)
See lessTo create a superior race, an Albino rapes members of his own Black community, then his offspring use White magic to drastically increase their numbers and later summon demons to turn the tides of war.
Whilst it may be set in the past, I think historical films would be ones which focused on events from mankind's history. This would fall under fantasy to me. What is the event that kicks this story off? Who is the protagonist? What is their goal? These three questions are really important to understRead more
Whilst it may be set in the past, I think historical films would be ones which focused on events from mankind’s history. This would fall under fantasy to me.
What is the event that kicks this story off? Who is the protagonist? What is their goal?
These three questions are really important to understanding the story. Without these, you simply have a premise. I think the world in which your story is set is an interesting one. Now give us an individual’s story through this war.
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