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When a savage killer hunts a Chicago neighborhood, a seasoned detective must stop him; but the cop quickly becomes the prey, left with his rookie partner as the only one he can trust.
The logline practically is: "When a savage killer stalks a Chicago neighborhood, a seasoned but [flawed] detective must stop him, with the help of his [complimentary flawed] rookie partner." I keep the rookie partner element because it's the only thing that differentiates this logline from any otherRead more
The logline practically is:
“When a savage killer stalks a Chicago neighborhood, a seasoned but [flawed] detective must stop him, with the help of his [complimentary flawed] rookie partner.”
I keep the rookie partner element because it’s the only thing that differentiates this logline from any other police thriller ever made. Find the flaws.
Can you think of anyhing that makes the story special? Perhaps the killer’s MO? Perhaps the protagonists’ flaws? Or the dynamic between them?
(For example, in “Seven” the MO related to the 7 deadly sins was the hook that made the story unique.)
The following is part of the genre convention, so I wouldn’t bother with it:
“… the cop quickly becomes the prey, left with his rookie partner as the only one he can trust.”
The cop in police thrillers always becomes the killer’s target, in Act Three. So nothing special here.
See lessA tabloid photographer races to uncover a deadly parasitic outbreak before his estranged daughter becomes the next victim.
Un fot?grafo sensacionalista corre para "hacer p?blico" un brote parasitario mortal antes de que su "distante" hija se convierta en la pr?xima v?ctima.Yo entend? la idea as?. O sea que el fot?grafo quiere hacer p?blico un brote parasitario a?n desconocido para las masas, para que su hija, que vive eRead more
Un fot?grafo sensacionalista corre para “hacer p?blico” un brote parasitario mortal antes de que su “distante” hija se convierta en la pr?xima v?ctima.
Yo entend? la idea as?. O sea que el fot?grafo quiere hacer p?blico un brote parasitario a?n desconocido para las masas, para que su hija, que vive en otra parte, se entere y logre protegerse. ?Puede ser?
See lessResentful towards his prey and questioning his abilities ever since the death of his protege, a hunter pursues a family protecting a monster they believe to be their deceased matriarch.
As it stands I am much more interested in the family who believes a monster is their reincarnated grandmother. Is the man a game hunter? Why does he go after the family? There are two plots happening in this logline and they are currently not jiving together.
As it stands I am much more interested in the family who believes a monster is their reincarnated grandmother. Is the man a game hunter? Why does he go after the family? There are two plots happening in this logline and they are currently not jiving together.
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