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  1. Posted: September 3, 2019In: Romance

    A guy asks 100 people “Which comedian is going to land on his feet and get his end away with an absolute cracker?”? You said, “Les Dennis,” our survey said, “Ding, top answer!” Jammy bastard.

    guswakey Logliner
    Added an answer on September 12, 2019 at 12:18 pm

    Extras!

    Extras!

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  2. Posted: September 12, 2019In: Drama

    In order to say goodbye to his dying mother, an exiled gangster turned priest must finally face his past.

    Paul Clarke Samurai
    Added an answer on September 12, 2019 at 11:14 am

    That's a good first half of a logline, but you stop right when things get interesting -- Tell us what he must do, what he must overcome in order to say goodbye to his mother. The stakes are clear, as is some urgency with the ticking clock of her imminent death. There's also some great irony in a ganRead more

    That’s a good first half of a logline, but you stop right when things get interesting — Tell us what he must do, what he must overcome in order to say goodbye to his mother. The stakes are clear, as is some urgency with the ticking clock of her imminent death. There’s also some great irony in a gangster turned priest, we’re just missing that last element so we can accurately see this movie in our mind.

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  3. Posted: September 11, 2019In: Romance

    A troubled playboy falls for his nubile fiancee?s soon-to-be stepmother, a woman who wants nothing to do with him.

    yqwertz Mentor
    Added an answer on September 11, 2019 at 5:31 pm

    If the "soon-to-be stepmother" has rejected the playboy, what is his new goal? Does he marry the nubile fiance to be near her step-mother? (A reverse Lolita story.) Or does he try to win the stepmother over before the wedding? Or does he call off the wedding to pursue the stepmother? Or does he forgRead more

    If the “soon-to-be stepmother” has rejected the playboy, what is his new goal? Does he marry the nubile fiance to be near her step-mother? (A reverse Lolita story.) Or does he try to win the stepmother over before the wedding? Or does he call off the wedding to pursue the stepmother? Or does he forget the stepmother and accept the woman who loves him?

    Maybe this helps to think about it:

    After falling for his nubile fiancee’s soon-to-be stepmother – a woman who wants nothing to do with him – a trouble playboy must [do something].

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