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In a 22nd century crime-free world, self-regulated by an omnipotent social media structure, a remorseless policeman, re-purposed to chase down and kill individuals who have not met minimum popularity requirements, tries to survive and rebel after himself failing the social media diktat.
All good points. Thanks much for taking the time. I will mull things over and be back.
All good points. Thanks much for taking the time. I will mull things over and be back.
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Good rough draft rewrite by yqwertz.? There has to be something obvious at stake for the main character.
Good rough draft rewrite by yqwertz.? There has to be something obvious at stake for the main character.
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It seems as if what sets the lead character into conflict is actually falling for his rivals fiance' The story would be about what your character does about it. Therefore I wouldn't bury it at the end of the logline. Or to put it another way, this logline is all set-up.
It seems as if what sets the lead character into conflict is actually falling for his rivals fiance’
The story would be about what your character does about it.
Therefore I wouldn’t bury it at the end of the logline.
Or to put it another way, this logline is all set-up.
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