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  1. Posted: September 8, 2019In: Drama

      A young girl overcomes obstacles in her life to become the first native African to win Miss World.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on September 8, 2019 at 12:52 pm

    It would help if there was a specific obstacle she must overcome. What is the main conflict?

    It would help if there was a specific obstacle she must overcome.

    What is the main conflict?

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  2. Posted: November 27, 2018In: Comedy

    When a mutated pubic lice epidemic turns people into sex-crazed zombies, a prudish neuroscientist teams up with a loud prostitute to find and spread the cure.

    giannisggeorgiou Samurai
    Added an answer on September 8, 2019 at 3:20 am

    Thank you all for pointing out the sexist aspect of this premise. I admit I was blind to it and very frivolous about the whole idea.I see that making a prostitute have unprotected sex to spread the lice remedy is a perverse idea. The clich? of her characterisation only makes things worse. So does fiRead more

    Thank you all for pointing out the sexist aspect of this premise. I admit I was blind to it and very frivolous about the whole idea.

    I see that making a prostitute have unprotected sex to spread the lice remedy is a perverse idea. The clich? of her characterisation only makes things worse. So does filing the story under “comedy.”

    Thank you all, again.

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  3. Posted: August 27, 2019In: Coming of Age

    A young pyromaniac makes friends with a group of self-avowed Satanists. Things go wrong when one of her new friends tries to exploit her fire-starting tendencies for their own goal.

    giannisggeorgiou Samurai
    Added an answer on September 8, 2019 at 2:27 am

    When a rehabilitated pyromaniac finds acceptance in a group of satanists with a manipulative but charismatic leader, she must prove her worth by burning down the Notre Dame."burn a church" because it's a [pyromaniac + satanists] plot. Make the church as big and important as possible. Raise the stakeRead more

    When a rehabilitated pyromaniac finds acceptance in a group of satanists with a manipulative but charismatic leader, she must prove her worth by burning down the Notre Dame.

    “burn a church” because it’s a [pyromaniac + satanists] plot. Make the church as big and important as possible. Raise the stakes.

    “prove her worth” to the cult’s leader, a mother/father figure. This will create an inner conflict and a journey. She thinks she must prove her worth to her new family, by doing as they say, but she knows it’s wrong.

    “rehabilitated” because it implies backstory, addiction, relapse, weakness, but also an effort to get better.

    “find acceptance in a new family” because it implies rejection from her own family. I always find it interesting as a backstory. In Boogie Nights, Dirk Diggler gets rejected by his mum, but he finds a new family in the porn industry.

    “manipulative” or “obsessive” because it implied that the leader considers their cause more important than the relationship with the protagonist?they will use her.

    The leader can be male or female, depending on the dynamics you want to give. She will be a mother figure or he will be a father figure?this will blend with the protagonist’s backstory wound.

    I don’t know if this is the story you want to tell, but I am totally hooked.

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