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  1. Posted: August 20, 2019In: Drama

    An ageing married couple teetering on the brink of bankruptcy attempt to stop their farm being repossessed by holding a cynical mortgage field-agent hostage at gunpoint.

    Mike Pedley Singularity
    Added an answer on August 20, 2019 at 11:10 pm

    What happens next? This, to me, is simply the inciting incident so we need to know what either the married couple do next or what the field-agent does next. The alternative is that the whole "gunpoint" bit is actually where they end up in act III. If that's the case then we need to know more about wRead more

    What happens next? This, to me, is simply the inciting incident so we need to know what either the married couple do next or what the field-agent does next.

    The alternative is that the whole “gunpoint” bit is actually where they end up in act III. If that’s the case then we need to know more about what happens before that.

    When a mortgage field-agent threatens to repossess their farm, an ageing married couple must…..

    And then tell us what they must do to stop this happening.

    Hope this helps.

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  2. Posted: August 17, 2019In: Comedy

    A failed actor awakens from a six-day coma following a car accident believing he is Hollywood star Matthew McConnaughey. Despite widespread confusion from his family and friends, he attempts to rejuvenate his movie career.

    giannisggeorgiou Samurai
    Added an answer on August 20, 2019 at 8:24 pm

    "When a short coma leaves him with the illusion he is a successful movie star, a struggling actor must..." Must what? The second sentence is just vague. As Richiev says, no specific goal or conflict, esp. one that ties well with his illusion of being Matthew M.

    “When a short coma leaves him with the illusion he is a successful movie star, a struggling actor must…”

    Must what? The second sentence is just vague. As Richiev says, no specific goal or conflict, esp. one that ties well with his illusion of being Matthew M.

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  3. Posted: August 17, 2019In: SciFi

    A Mafia family in grave danger after testifying against a notorious organized crime figure are invited to take part in an experimental government witness protection program where their consciousnesses will be uploaded to a simulated reality.

    giannisggeorgiou Samurai
    Added an answer on August 20, 2019 at 8:09 pm

    I don't get it. How does the upload protect them? How does it stop their enemy from wiping out their physical bodies?

    I don’t get it. How does the upload protect them? How does it stop their enemy from wiping out their physical bodies?

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