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  1. Posted: July 19, 2019In: Drama

    After a series of career setbacks, a washed-up singer visits her former longtime partner to fix their careers, only to find out he wants to quit.

    girlbad Penpusher
    Added an answer on August 14, 2019 at 11:58 am

    I like this idea. I don't find the meditation cliched. Success is relative. I would like to know more about this story.

    I like this idea. I don’t find the meditation cliched. Success is relative. I would like to know more about this story.

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  2. Posted: July 27, 2019In: Drama, Examples

    A poverty-stricken mother supports her family by smuggling illegal immigrants across the U.S. Canadian Border.

    girlbad Penpusher
    Added an answer on August 14, 2019 at 11:45 am

    Good idea. There's a lot of potential for a great story here. It make me want to know more.

    Good idea. There’s a lot of potential for a great story here. It make me want to know more.

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  3. Posted: August 13, 2019In: War

    In the throes of the Iraq war, a flight medic and his crew risk their lives to save injured soldiers and civilians alike.

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    Added an answer on August 13, 2019 at 10:50 pm

    As the others have said.The logline sets up an interesting situation for a plot, but, alas, it fails to follow through with a genuine plot.? Taken at face value, it promises an episodic narrative (aka: a string of pearls) where one damn thing (crisis) happens... and then another damn thing happens..Read more

    As the others have said.

    The logline sets up an interesting situation for a plot, but, alas, it fails to follow through with a genuine plot.? Taken at face value, it promises an episodic narrative (aka: a string of pearls) where one damn thing (crisis) happens… and then another damn thing happens… and then another.? And “one damn thing after another” is necessary for building a plot.? And all the damn things may be harrowing, full of jeopardy, conflict,.

    But they ares not sufficient.? To what dramatic climax are all the “one damn things after another” building?? What is the overarching objective goal of the protagonist?

    If you haven’t already done so, I suggest you try running your logline through the site’s logline generator..

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