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The mixed breed Believing to be a human being and having a normal life with her ?parents?, Fiona coming back from seeing her best friend off took a new road to her home only to be got up between the above world and underworld clashes over the human race thereby finding out she was not a human but a mixed breed of both angel and demon and must choose the path to follow that will decide the fate of the human race.
There are a lot of words in this logline,? a lot of set up, and yet I can't picture the plot in my head. What is the actual story about? Because right now the only thing the lead character does is 'choose', and I don't see how that will take up two hours of screen time? Something along the lines of:Read more
There are a lot of words in this logline,? a lot of set up, and yet I can’t picture the plot in my head.
What is the actual story about?
Because right now the only thing the lead character does is ‘choose’, and I don’t see how that will take up two hours of screen time?
Something along the lines of: “When she discovers she is half-angel, half-demon, a (Give a description) must (Do this thing) or (This bad thing) will happen to the human race.”
See lessIn a world where magic is determined by hair color and people with the same magic can temporarily share power, a yellow haired boy longs to be with his kind but discovers they have been divided by war with other magic types. After finally meeting others like him, he finds he can share power permanently and leaves to unite his people.
RyanMy concern is that in these times of hyper-sensitivity to multiple issues of discrimination on the basis of this or that trait (race,? gender orientation and identity), your premise runs the risk of being misinterpreted.? What is the difference between discrimination, association and tribal confRead more
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My concern is that in these times of hyper-sensitivity to multiple issues of discrimination on the basis of this or that trait (race,? gender orientation and identity), your premise runs the risk of being misinterpreted.? What is the difference between discrimination, association and tribal conflict on the basis of hair color versus discrimination, association and tribal conflict on the basis of skin color?
Why must the protagonist? organize his kind?? Organize them against whom?? So his? kind can fight Black haired people?? Red heads?
What is your thematic point of organizing people and pitting against others on the basis of their hair color?
See lessAfter an outsider college clique finds that a young magic poet can write love poems that make every woman fall in love with them, they kidnap the guy, only to find out that real love has to be mutual.
"When the woman he connects with on social media shows up unannounced, a shy but good-hearted romantic must find a way to win her heart when she mistakenly believes his good looking roommate (Whose picture he used) is the man she fell in love with."Title: Love me Tinder(Or reverse it so the lead isRead more
“When the woman he connects with on social media shows up unannounced, a shy but good-hearted romantic must find a way to win her heart when she mistakenly believes his good looking roommate (Whose picture he used) is the man she fell in love with.”
Title: Love me Tinder
(Or reverse it so the lead is a shy woman who has a good looking roommate if you would prefer a female protagonist)
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