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After falling for the tennis world champion, a no-name photographer gets a job at the Wimbledon tournament and pretends to be a successful newspaper owner to win her heart.
Savinh0:One other thought:? The shy-guy must compete for her attention and affection with a romantic rival who is everything he isn't.? And may be pushing for and on the verge of getting her to marry him.The end of Act 2 "darkest hour" could be her agreeing to marry the rival.? And she asks the shyRead more
Savinh0:
One other thought:? The shy-guy must compete for her attention and affection with a romantic rival who is everything he isn’t.? And may be pushing for and on the verge of getting her to marry him.
The end of Act 2 “darkest hour” could be her agreeing to marry the rival.? And she asks the shy guy photographer to shoot their wedding.
Now what will he do?? What must he do?
Whatever, I see a more interesting story with your protagonist in the role of a photographer than the other roles you have been auditioning him in other loglines.
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Excellent notes by? Richiev.? I particularly like his addition of a piece of information that explains what the two parties are feuding over: gambling.As presented, the logline sets up a situation for a plot but it doesn't follow through with a complete statement of a plot.? A plot is not just aboutRead more
Excellent notes by? Richiev.? I particularly like his addition of a piece of information that explains what the two parties are feuding over: gambling.
As presented, the logline sets up a situation for a plot but it doesn’t follow through with a complete statement of a plot.? A plot is not just about a characters “finding? themselves” in a predicament.? It’s about what they must do about it.? ?Must they hike their way out or fight their way out?
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Lol, in response to DPG?s idea about a 30-year-old woman who has never had an orgasm. There could be some very funny bits you could infuse into your story. Comedic bits: She buys an old motorcycle and goes over a bunch of speed bumps. She askes if she could use her friend?s dryer, loads a bunch of sRead more
Lol, in response to DPG?s idea about a 30-year-old woman who has never had an orgasm. There could be some very funny bits you could infuse into your story.
Comedic bits:
She buys an old motorcycle and goes over a bunch of speed bumps.
She askes if she could use her friend?s dryer, loads a bunch of shoes and sits on top of it.
She tries horseback riding.
She goes to a very straight-laced hypnotist who normally helps people quit smoking and explains she wants him to help her have an orgasm.
She self-consciously tries to read, ?How to have an orgasm? while riding the subway, gets weird looks, then an eighty-year-old lady nods and gives her a thumbs up.
The basic idea is she looks up on-line all the things woman claim have given them an orgasm and tries them out? probably in the form of a montage. (Set to ?I touch myself? or some song along those lines depending on the rights)
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