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A young closeted Asian man decides to lose his virginity, to a stranger that he meets online.
As the others have said.? Obviously, it's a risky venture? on his part.? Anything and everything could go wrong. I suggest as an additional complication, he's? under a lot of pressure from his family to marry, have kids.
As the others have said.? Obviously, it’s a risky venture? on his part.? Anything and everything could go wrong. I suggest as an additional complication, he’s? under a lot of pressure from his family to marry, have kids.
See lessCiara had a drinking problem. Now she’s trying to navigate her newfound sobriety in a world that’s often three sheets to the wind.? But when alcohol upends your life, what happens next? She doesn’t know…yet.
Check out the "our formula" page to help with formatting. What's the inciting incident that starts this story? Who is Ciara? We don't need a name... it doesn't add anything to the story. Instead tell us who she is - character and characteristic. What is she trying to achieve - what is her visual goaRead more
Check out the “our formula” page to help with formatting.
What’s the inciting incident that starts this story? Who is Ciara? We don’t need a name… it doesn’t add anything to the story. Instead tell us who she is – character and characteristic. What is she trying to achieve – what is her visual goal?
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See lessForced to quit drinking, Lucy must learn how to navigate sobriety in a world that’s often three sheets to the wind. Turns out avoiding happy hour is a lot easier than avoiding your true self.
What is the lead character's ultimate goal, to quit drinking for good, or to find her true self? Because as written, things happen to your lead character in this logline, instead of the lead character taking action.
What is the lead character’s ultimate goal, to quit drinking for good, or to find her true self?
Because as written, things happen to your lead character in this logline, instead of the lead character taking action.
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