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When a social phobic former photographer falls in love with the number one tennis star in the world, he must overcome his anxieties in order to get back his job and be with her.
>>>the pictures he took (hanging at his home)Suggest instead:? Instagram, Flickr, etc. (If the pictures are only hanging in his home, and he only goes out at night -- how will she ever know about them, even know he exists?)So, she's going to rescue him.? What does she get in return?? What'sRead more
>>>the pictures he took (hanging at his home)
Suggest instead:? Instagram, Flickr, etc. (If the pictures are only hanging in his home, and he only goes out at night — how will she ever know about them, even know he exists?)
So, she’s going to rescue him.? What does she get in return?? What’s in the relationship for her?? Where’s the reciprocity?? What can he do for her that she needs?
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Tjmohr:I like the inciting incident.? It's a great metaphor for the sexual tension? -- in his mind, anyway.However, having him to overtly seduce her is oafish, tacky --- just plain dumb even for a comedy.? ?Especially in the #MeToo era.? He has a fatal character of not being able to? treat her as anRead more
Tjmohr:
I like the inciting incident.? It’s a great metaphor for the sexual tension? — in his mind, anyway.
However, having him to overtly seduce her is oafish, tacky — just plain dumb even for a comedy.? ?Especially in the #MeToo era.? He has a fatal character of not being able to? treat her as anything more than sex object.? ?He deserves for her to slap? him in the face and storm away.? So it seems to me a more acceptable objective goal would be for him to a date in a manner where she doesn’t laugh in his face and walk away.? Treat her like a lady.
And rather than describe her as being a snob, describe her as being classy — he’s trying to date outside his league, above his place in the prevailing social order.? Which in this version of the logline, he most surely is.
fwiw
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Ever see House (1985) starring William Katt?? Because this idea is very similar.
Ever see House (1985) starring William Katt?? Because this idea is very similar.
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