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A shy guy tries to seduce a snobby girl during an awkward pre-arranged mating session between their chihuahua dogs. COMEDY SHORT
For a short I like the premise, two shy people meet to allow their dogs to mate, it's embarrassing so they engage in small talk while behind them you hear the mating noises. As for the logline, this is a little tougher, the line, "Must deal with the situation" is not very specific. How does he speciRead more
For a short I like the premise, two shy people meet to allow their dogs to mate, it’s embarrassing so they engage in small talk while behind them you hear the mating noises.
As for the logline, this is a little tougher, the line, “Must deal with the situation” is not very specific. How does he specifically deal with the situation?
Is his objective to just get through the situation?
Is his goal to put his counterpart at ease?
Is his goal to get a date from the girl?
Anyway, I like this premise as a short or even just as a skit,? but you might want to add a specific or two, to the logline.
See lessWhile on a routine mission, the angel of death awakens the wrath of the apocalypse and must travel through hell to find his redemption.
How will traveling through hell help the angel find redemption? You might need some sort of specific at this part of the logline. Does the angel have a suitcase, take pictures with his iphone and maybe stop at some of the tourist attractions? What does the angel do during his travels through hell? NRead more
How will traveling through hell help the angel find redemption?
You might need some sort of specific at this part of the logline.
Does the angel have a suitcase, take pictures with his iphone and maybe stop at some of the tourist attractions? What does the angel do during his travels through hell?
Now if the Angel must kill or stop a specific demon in hell that would probably make more sense. If that’s the case you might want to add that specific to your logline.
See lessWhen a wallflower is tired of being overlooked and underestimated, she sets out on a journey of self-discovery to come off the wall and out of her shell.
This is a classic story, I think you need to add how this story is different to the logline. What's unique about your version of this story?
This is a classic story, I think you need to add how this story is different to the logline. What’s unique about your version of this story?
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