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  1. Posted: December 12, 2022In: SciFi

    An assassin embroiled in a plot against Queen Victoria is psychically attacked by a mysterious cult, flooding her mind with memories from a madman and inflaming her to pursue the cult’s destruction.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on December 15, 2022 at 10:22 am

    A bit confusing. Why would the cult want to make the assassin want to destroy their own cult?

    A bit confusing. Why would the cult want to make the assassin want to destroy their own cult?

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  2. Posted: November 25, 2022In: Thriller

    Families must take the law into their own hands after they discover the new neighbors aren’t the perfect family everyone thought they were.

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    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on December 5, 2022 at 8:08 am

    A logline must be compelling, it's what sells the story to the industry. Your logline would improve and draw the reader in if it were more specific. There should be a specific event that compels the family to take the law into their own hands and that event should be personal. The event should alsoRead more

    A logline must be compelling, it’s what sells the story to the industry.

    Your logline would improve and draw the reader in if it were more specific.

    There should be a specific event that compels the family to take the law into their own hands and that event should be personal.

    The event should also be horrific enough that the reader will understand why it might compel an ordinary person to take the law into their own hands.

    Finally, there should be stakes of some sort if the lead character fails.

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  3. Posted: November 10, 2022In: Action

    A tale of redemption and violence when a former boxing world champion relives his own past mistakes and must chase down his student for killing another person in cold blood.

    Odie Samurai
    Added an answer on November 23, 2022 at 9:20 am

    For your consideration: Is the student the reigning champion? Will the former champ, now trainer come out of retirement? Concerning the deceased person, was he a long-standing rival of the former champ? Take care.

    For your consideration:
    Is the student the reigning champion?
    Will the former champ, now trainer come out of retirement?
    Concerning the deceased person, was he a long-standing rival of the former champ?

    Take care.

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