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  1. Posted: October 18, 2022In: Comedy

    Two stoner best friends and Patriots fans must race against time to get last minute tickets to a game they want to go.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on October 18, 2022 at 7:39 pm

    Up the stakes: "When he discovers his best friend, who is a rabid patriot fan is dying of cancer, a stoner must secure tickets to New England's playoff game so his friend can have one last perfect moment."

    Up the stakes:

    “When he discovers his best friend, who is a rabid patriot fan is dying of cancer, a stoner must secure tickets to New England’s playoff game so his friend can have one last perfect moment.”

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  2. Posted: October 11, 2022In: Short Film

    When a socially-awkward man encounters a thespian girl in an improv class, he must push past his anxiety and perform in a battle for her hand against a man with the same intent.

    Mike Pedley Singularity
    Added an answer on October 13, 2022 at 4:54 pm

    The whole thing kinda reduces the girl to a prize to be won... not sure that's really appropriate in this modern day world. She needs to be an active character, not just a trophy.

    The whole thing kinda reduces the girl to a prize to be won… not sure that’s really appropriate in this modern day world. She needs to be an active character, not just a trophy.

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  3. Posted: October 13, 2022In: Drama

    A young woman struggles to cope with life in America after being orphaned by parents immigrated from war torn Lebanon.

    OKBoomer Penpusher
    Added an answer on October 13, 2022 at 11:10 am

    This is a little confusing. Can I suggest... When a young Lebanese immigrant is orphaned, she struggles with her new life in America. - or - When a young orphan flees war-torn Lebanon, she struggles with her new life in America. I also recommend including with the specifics of her struggle. For examRead more

    This is a little confusing.

    Can I suggest…

    When a young Lebanese immigrant is orphaned, she struggles with her new life in America.

    – or –

    When a young orphan flees war-torn Lebanon, she struggles with her new life in America.

    I also recommend including with the specifics of her struggle. For example, is she struggling the feelings of isolation? Is she struggling to find a long lost relative?

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