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A high school student moves with her mother, her grandmother and her two aunts, she discovers that they and other people around her as disguised as aliens.
Hi tony18, This sounds like a synopsis more than a logline to me. You are telling your story in a short paragraph. I suggest 1- Correcting grammar/spelling 2- Use the logline "generator" and/or 3- Click on the "Formula" icon at the top of this page and study the content carefully. Good Luck
Hi tony18,
This sounds like a synopsis more than a logline to me. You are telling your story in a short paragraph. I suggest
1- Correcting grammar/spelling
2- Use the logline “generator”
and/or
3- Click on the “Formula” icon at the top of this page and study the content carefully.
Good Luck
See lessA man goes to a class reunion his high school classmate he pined for only to find out she became famous.
Hi tony18, This sounds like a synopsis more than a logline to me. You are telling your story in a short paragraph. I suggest 1- Correcting grammar/spelling 2- Use the logline "generator" and/or 3- Click on the "Formula" icon at the top of this page and study the content carefully. Good Luck
Hi tony18,
This sounds like a synopsis more than a logline to me. You are telling your story in a short paragraph. I suggest
1- Correcting grammar/spelling
2- Use the logline “generator”
and/or
3- Click on the “Formula” icon at the top of this page and study the content carefully.
Good Luck
See lessA college student has a superstition that people killed at a music festival she goes to.
Hi tony18, To me, this is what you are trying to say: "A college student has a premonition that there will be a massacre at a music festival she is going to attend." But I think the logline above should be co continued with "and", and you should mention what the college student does about it. I hopeRead more
Hi tony18,
To me, this is what you are trying to say:
“A college student has a premonition that there will be a massacre at a music festival she is going to attend.”
But I think the logline above should be co continued with “and”, and you should mention what the college student does about it.
I hope this helps
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