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After being fired from drinking on the job, a disc jockey teams up with a party planner to help him get sober and to help him with next gig.
Hi tony18, An alcoholic DJ who has lost his last gig asks a party planner to help him sober up and get his life under control. Is this what you are trying to say in your logline? Whether your answer is yes or no, click on the "FORMULA" icon at the top of this page and study the content a few times.Read more
Hi tony18,
An alcoholic DJ who has lost his last gig asks a party planner to help him sober up and get his life under control.
Is this what you are trying to say in your logline? Whether your answer is yes or no, click on the “FORMULA” icon at the top of this page and study the content a few times. This will help you in constructing your loglines.
Good Luck
See lessAn American hit man must make a pact with the devil by takes an Ethiopian taxi driver hostage and kidnap a prostitute and must help her from a pimp.
Hi tony18, An American hitman must make a pact with the devil. Why? by taking an Ethiopian taxi driver hostage and kidnapping a prostitute. Does he achieve taking the Ethiopian taxi driver hostage and kidnaping a prostitute? Any problems/issues/conflicts/barriers stopping him? What is the devil goinRead more
Hi tony18,
An American hitman must make a pact with the devil. Why? by taking an Ethiopian taxi driver hostage and kidnapping a prostitute. Does he achieve taking the Ethiopian taxi driver hostage and kidnaping a prostitute? Any problems/issues/conflicts/barriers stopping him? What is the devil going to do in return?
Have all these answers present in your logline
I hope this helps
See lessWhen his sister disappears in a magic-reliant space colony, a new wizard must break free to find her; but when he discovers they are not in space he must learn to not blindly follow, become a leader, and rally the people to take out the president before others are killed.
Hi MitchW, I think you are providing some unnecessary information in your logline. Stick to the core story. Below you can see what I understood you were trying to say while reading your logline. A ......(who? describe your lead character)....... who is searching for his missing sister in ..........(Read more
Hi MitchW,
I think you are providing some unnecessary information in your logline. Stick to the core story. Below you can see what I understood you were trying to say while reading your logline.
A ……(who? describe your lead character)……. who is searching for his missing sister in ……….(Where? Describe the ambiance/location/place)……, discovers that innocent people are being killed by authorities for no good reason and decides to end the killings/slaughter/crimes/etc.
I hope this helps
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