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  1. Posted: September 5, 2021In: Romance

    A widower, a teacher, a taxi driver and a radio host discover love and romance in a hotel during Christmas.

    Odie Samurai
    Added an answer on September 7, 2021 at 8:03 am

    Even Hallmark movies have some kind of opposition/obstacle ;) As an example, consider trading "love" for e.g., "accepting diversity" with all these mixed backgrounds, thus finding romance. Keep going.

    Even Hallmark movies have some kind of opposition/obstacle 😉
    As an example, consider trading “love” for e.g., “accepting diversity” with all these mixed backgrounds, thus finding romance.

    Keep going.

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  2. Posted: May 30, 2021In: Romance

    A horse rider develops a relationship with a woman in order to help overcome her fear of horses.

    Lotcher Samurai
    Added an answer on May 30, 2021 at 1:16 pm

    I don't understand how the protagonist can be described as a being a "horse rider" when they are also described as having a fear of horse riding. Does the protagonist have a mental disability and is seeking equine therapy? Or perhaps the protagonist was a former jockey and is recovering from fallingRead more

    I don’t understand how the protagonist can be described as a being a “horse rider” when they are also described as having a fear of horse riding. Does the protagonist have a mental disability and is seeking equine therapy? Or perhaps the protagonist was a former jockey and is recovering from falling off a horse mid-race and wants to shake off her newfound fear of horse riding?

    Currently the character in your logline does make much sense and this is bad since character is one of the most crucial things to communicate in a logline. Once found a way to better describe your character you then need to consider how to best describe the story, I need more of an understanding as the details of the relationship with the “woman” since it is not explained how that is related to the protagonist’s fear of horses.

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  3. Posted: April 16, 2021In: Romance

    A meek 20-something woman finds herself at the wrong place and time when her boyfriend was murdered by a serial killer in which she didn’t commit.

    Philippe Le Miere Logliner
    Added an answer on April 16, 2021 at 3:49 pm

    Ah, Romance genre? ... murder, mystery, false accusations ... usually genre = Thriller Ok, so we have one "woman" - lets give this woman some shape. Age, race, nationality, height, hair color ... you get the picture, right! Then there's my favorite - psychology. Is this a strong woman, cause if so,Read more

    Ah, Romance genre? … murder, mystery, false accusations … usually genre = Thriller

    Ok, so we have one “woman” – lets give this woman some shape. Age, race, nationality, height, hair color … you get the picture, right!

    Then there’s my favorite – psychology. Is this a strong woman, cause if so, she will react very differently to a murder scene, than say, if she was a meek person.

    Finally, who did commit this mystery murder – remember loglines are a short synopsis – not marketing.

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