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Who is the protagonist? If it's the memory guy, what is his goal? What is at stake for him? It seems to be a narrative about a day at the office.
Who is the protagonist? If it’s the memory guy, what is his goal? What is at stake for him? It seems to be a narrative about a day at the office.
See lessWhen an almost broken family buys a mysterious ranch in Utah, their lives are threatened by supernatural events connected to a ?Skinwalker?, a local mythical creature. Past, present, and future come together to solve a mystery that transcends human nature and spans three generations from the late 80?s to 2019.
A common problem is the first act focus. What is the movie about? Is there a strong emotional angle?
A common problem is the first act focus.
What is the movie about? Is there a strong emotional angle?
See lessA young woman in search of her parents finds herself in a fight for her life when an extraterrestrial warrior believe her to be a legendary weapon created to defend against the invader.
>>>her real abilities show until she?s older (when the story starts). Okay, that could work if the film story begins with the emergence of her extra-human abilities in puberty. (I have no idea what they are, but I assume you've got that figured out.) I suggest for the purpose of the loglineRead more
>>>her real abilities show until she?s older (when the story starts).
Okay, that could work if the film story begins with the emergence of her extra-human abilities in puberty. (I have no idea what they are, but I assume you’ve got that figured out.)
I suggest for the purpose of the logline that having her looking for her parents be considered as a long term narrative arc for the franchise.? One that need not be included in a logline for the origin chapter.? It’s a goal she takes on later after she’s become fully aware of her powers, the implications and the cosmic stakes.? Just as Luke Skywalker doesn’t know who he really is and what is at stake for him in using the Force until the “Big Reveal” at the end of the second chapter of the original “Star Wars” franchise.
The logline for the origin chapter of your saga should focus on her most immediate and urgent objective goal in that chapter.? Which is…?
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