1. Posted: May 15, 2017In:

    A pair of gifted siblings fight to avenge their mother’s murder at the hands of their cyborg uncle after their disappearance into the Bermuda Triangle years before.

    Foxtrot25 Uberwriter

    Say what? Why does a cyborg murder people inside of the Bermuda Triangle? Although, I watch anything with cyborgs in it.

    Say what? Why does a cyborg murder people inside of the Bermuda Triangle? Although, I watch anything with cyborgs in it.

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  2. Posted: May 9, 2017In:

    Abducted by unmanned alien research vessel, a short-fused alcoholic plumber must escape their superior technology before it leaves our world forever.

    Foxtrot25 Uberwriter

    I assume he uses his "flushing knowledge" from being a plumber to escape into the vastness of the ship. Again, the only idea here that peaks my interest because it's new and ironic.

    I assume he uses his “flushing knowledge” from being a plumber to escape into the vastness of the ship. Again, the only idea here that peaks my interest because it’s new and ironic.

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  3. Posted: May 5, 2017In:

    To fulfill a family vendetta a lone warrior must transform a helpless and divided faction into a superior force in order to end an aged war.

    Richiev Singularity

    One more thing, I noticed the bad guy is a warlord named?Shatterros. I would mention the warlord leader (You don't necessarily have to name him) in your logline. It is always good to put a face on the opposition.When his peaceful tribe is destroyed by an evil warlord When his tribe is destroyed by aRead more

    One more thing, I noticed the bad guy is a warlord named?Shatterros. I would mention the warlord leader (You don’t necessarily have to name him) in your logline. It is always good to put a face on the opposition.

    When his peaceful tribe is destroyed by an evil warlord
    When his tribe is destroyed by an evil Warlord named Shatterros,

    Hope that helped.

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