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A man raised in space, and taught how to be human by a Russian cyborg chimpanzee, must help Elvis Presley protect his time machine from a jealous alien hell-bent on destroying the galaxy.
The first man??born and raised and raped by an alien?on the International Space Station?& his lifelong teacher - a psychotic??Soviet Era built??Chimpborg (Cyborg-chimpanzee), are forced to help? Sivle Yelserp, (Elvis Presley in the 5th Dimension)? protect his time machine from a?musically challeRead more
The first man??born and raised and raped by an alien?on the International Space Station?& his lifelong teacher – a psychotic??Soviet Era built??Chimpborg (Cyborg-chimpanzee), are forced to help? Sivle Yelserp, (Elvis Presley in the 5th Dimension)? protect his time machine from a?musically challenged, jealous alien hell bent on destroying the Milky Way.
See lessA roadie for the greatest band in the galaxy struggles to recover a time machine hidden within Elvis Presley?s Graceland in order to defeat an alien psychopath hellbent on destroying the Milky Way.
solidjim:The good news is I think your story has some very imaginative characters and situations. ?The bad news is that the imaginary world you've created is hard to compress into a logline because the elements are, well, imaginary, hence, unfamiliar -- they don't map (much) to the familiar world anRead more
solidjim:
The good news is I think your story has some very imaginative characters and situations. ?The bad news is that the imaginary world you’ve created is hard to compress into a logline because the elements are, well, imaginary, hence, unfamiliar — they don’t map (much) to the familiar world and require definitions and explanations.
It seems to me that the dramatic engine propelling the plot is the, uh, plot by the assassin to annihilate our galaxy. ?Why does the “Shiny Man” want to do that? ?What has he got against Elvis? (He doesn’t like rock and roll?)
[BTW: ?have you thought about writing this story first as a graphic novel? ?That way, ?you’d have the visuals to show studio executives what kind of world and what kind of story you propose to know. ?I know a writer who did this. ?He wrote an imaginative SciFi story featuring an ensemble of new superheroes. ?But he didn’t have the artistic chops to draw, so he hired someone to adapt his screenplay as a graphic story and posted it to a web site. ?And then he pointed Hollyweird folks to that url. ?And it worked. He sold his script for a tidy 6 figure number.]
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See lessA human orphan raised in outer space must overcome his sense of abandonment to help Elvis Presley protect a time machine from an alien hellbent on destroying the galaxy.
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