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When a space trucker saves Elvis Presley from assassination he must return to Earth, a planet that abandoned him as a child, and recover Presley’s hidden time machine to prevent it from being used to destroy the galaxy.
Most things have been covered on this one. But I think the best course of action would be writing this out as a paragraph-long synopsis and then start trimming it back until you have something 25-30 words. Because there is plenty of important things here you've missed out and plenty of things that rRead more
Most things have been covered on this one. But I think the best course of action would be writing this out as a paragraph-long synopsis and then start trimming it back until you have something 25-30 words. Because there is plenty of important things here you’ve missed out and plenty of things that really are unnecessary.
What makes the Space Trucker your protag (i.e. what is his flaw)? Is Elvis in outer space when it happens? Who must return to Earth and why the hell does Elvis have a time machine?
But we don’t need to know about the assassination because it seems that the main plot is the time machine theft. So drop it. A lot of this could be dropped. Good luck.
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"If sighting the alien is the inciting incident, what dramatic question, stated in one sentence, does that raise that the rest of the plot will answer ? or at least hint at an answer?" Hmm, I'm going to have to say, will she survive.? I don't know if that works, but I'm going to have to re evaluateRead more
“If sighting the alien is the inciting incident, what dramatic question, stated in one sentence, does that raise that the rest of the plot will answer ? or at least hint at an answer?”
Hmm, I’m going to have to say, will she survive.? I don’t know if that works, but I’m going to have to re evaluate the script maybe.
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