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When a DiD sufferer takes an experimental drug for his condition, his alternate personality, who perceives reality differently, begins to takeover and goes on a quest to free humanity from hidden beings controlling reality while his alternate persona believes he’s actually on a murderous rampage.
Here is an attempt: ----- "After he's treated with an experimental drug for his DiD, a man will multiple personalities begins killing sinister?beings he discovers are secretly controlling the universe, but must fight his alternative personality who claims he is killing innocent people."
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“After he’s treated with an experimental drug for his DiD, a man will multiple personalities begins killing sinister?beings he discovers are secretly controlling the universe, but must fight his alternative personality who claims he is killing innocent people.”
?When a man realizes the creatures, he?s been convinced his whole life weren?t real, are actually trying to take over the world, will he turn against what end up being his own kind, or save his new love, and the rest of the human race?? ? UNKNOWN POWER by Judah Ray ?
Visions about what? What makes his visions special, of dramatic interest that they trigger dramatic action?"Define the human race" ????? ?What does that mean? ?What's the visual moment on that? ?Film is a visual medium and objective goals have to have a ?visual correlate that cues the audience thatRead more
Visions about what? What makes his visions special, of dramatic interest that they trigger dramatic action?
“Define the human race” ?
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What does that mean? ?What’s the visual moment on that? ?Film is a visual medium and objective goals have to have a ?visual correlate that cues the audience that the protagonist has achieved ?(or fallen short) of his objective goal.
Example: ?a sprinter’s objective goal is to win Olympic gold. ?The visual moment on that is: If he breaks the tape at the Olympic games he succeeds. ?If a competitor breaks the tape, he fails.
Again what is the visual for “defining the human race”? ?What does that moment LOOK like on a movie screen?
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Loglines imply a dramatic question but don’t explicitly raise the question. ?Again the example of the sprinter: ?his objective goal implicitly raises the question: ?will he succeed? ?But the logline would not be written in the form of a question.
So, the protagonist comes to realize he’s not imagining an invading species and that they are his kind. ?But he’s got good vibes about humanity. ?So: what becomes his objective goal in the context of his predicament? ?What must he do to save homo sapiens sapiens from his own species?
See lessWhen a soldier is killed battling space aliens only to be resurrected to fight the same battle again, he must fight and die every day until he learns how to defeat the aliens.
This film was done with Tom Cruise; Edge of Tomorrow. May I suggest changing the antagonists. Set in in a different reality than what has already been done. ?Though, EofT was just a few years ago.
This film was done with Tom Cruise; Edge of Tomorrow. May I suggest changing the antagonists. Set in in a different reality than what has already been done. ?Though, EofT was just a few years ago.
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