1. Posted: August 27, 2016In:

    Izzy Concannon: Rogue, outlaw, lost Terran, finds herself on a doomed vessel hunting the last of the mad battleships in deep space.

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    I agree with the above but also I think the "mad battleships" needs more ........ are the ships aware? Are the people manning them crazy? Can you think of a creative way to define the quest and make it more dramatic/dangerous? Why is she hunting them?

    I agree with the above but also I think the “mad battleships” needs more …….. are the ships aware? Are the people manning them crazy? Can you think of a creative way to define the quest and make it more dramatic/dangerous? Why is she hunting them?

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  2. Posted: August 4, 2016In:

    A struggling college student, plagued by his current state of being, discovers a device called the “God Helmet” and becomes the test subject for his Professor’s experiment.

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    I think this logline is essentially perfect.

    I think this logline is essentially perfect.

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  3. Posted: August 9, 2016In:

    When a groom-to-be discovers his identical twin has been replaced by an android, they must partner up to investigate his wedding party and find those responsible for the decoy.

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    Agreed with all the above ?comments. Also I can't explain why, but the premise tickled?my?funny?bone and conjured up a 4 Weddings and a Funeral angle in my mind. Have you considered making this a comedy?

    Agreed with all the above ?comments.

    Also I can’t explain why, but the premise tickled?my?funny?bone and conjured up a 4 Weddings and a Funeral angle in my mind. Have you considered making this a comedy?

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