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A faithless young farm girl seeking her life?s purpose, travels to a galaxy of advanced science and magic to obtain a legendary wand in a war of witches.
I am unclear about her initial motivation for leaving earth - ?assuming this is where the story begins? Was the purpose of her leaving to seek this wand? Or did the wand become relevant after she becomes involved in the war of witches? If the latter: A faithless young farm girl seeking her life's puRead more
I am unclear about her initial motivation for leaving earth – ?assuming this is where the story begins?
Was the purpose of her leaving to seek this wand? Or did the wand become relevant after she becomes involved in the war of witches? If the latter:
A faithless young farm girl seeking her life’s purpose travels to a galaxy of advanced science and magic, becoming caught between a war of witches.?
If the former: Does the girl choose to go to this galaxy or is she forced there?
A faithless young farm girl seeking her life’s purpose ?is swept away to a galaxy of advanced science and magic to seek a legendary wand ?after she?becomes caught between a war of witches.?
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Agree with FFF, the premise is "very conceptual", which is, to say too abstract to visualize.? What the visual on "conquering 5 world problems"?? What are the 5 problems?And why? 5?? Why not 4 or 3 or 2 or ?just 1??? Who/what has created this? apocalypse??It didn't just happen.Who made the call on tRead more
Agree with FFF, the premise is “very conceptual”, which is, to say too abstract to visualize.? What the visual on “conquering 5 world problems”?? What are the 5 problems?
And why? 5?? Why not 4 or 3 or 2 or ?just 1??? Who/what has created this? apocalypse??It didn’t just happen.
Who made the call on the 394 people to cull from the herd of 8 billion people on earth?? Who transported them, gave them the problems to solve– or else?
Who devised this “apocalyptic game”, established completely arbitrary rules, and arbitrarily dictated who must play or perish?? And why?
The premise relies on too much “magic”, too many?arbitrary rules and ?extraordinary?departures from the norms of the world as we know it.? It raises more questions? in my mind about how all the pieces fit together ?than interest in how it plays out.
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See lessWhen a scientist invents a vaccine for a virus that devastated the United States and uses it to build a deadly army, her former student must lead a special forces team to her hidden base in the Rocky Mountains in order to get the vaccine in the right hands.
I think an army is a symptom of power. What benefit does she have in having the army. How is it financed? Okay too much for a logline. But can be explained. Controls the control by controlling the vaccine. You see what I am aim at. A person must break into a private military base to obtain a vaccineRead more
I think an army is a symptom of power. What benefit does she have in having the army. How is it financed? Okay too much for a logline. But can be explained. Controls the control by controlling the vaccine. You see what I am aim at.
A person must break into a private military base to obtain a vaccine and save the general population.
Crap I know, needs personality, but the core is simply stated.
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