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When a planet in another galaxy is faced with annihilation, a plan hatches to have Franklin, an ordinary boy with extraordinary abilities from earth, help save the planet from destruction from the evil being known as Xero.
I like Nir Shelter's notion that the boy is kidnapped.? Furthering the concept, why not it be the case that there is nothing extraordinary about the boy as is growing up on planet earth; everybody thinks he's a loser.? So why would they kidnap him?? Because he has latent abilities that only become mRead more
I like Nir Shelter’s notion that the boy is kidnapped.? Furthering the concept, why not it be the case that there is nothing extraordinary about the boy as is growing up on planet earth; everybody thinks he’s a loser.? So why would they kidnap him?? Because he has latent abilities that only become manifest on the other planet.
Having that as the core concept– the hook– might have the makings for a good sci-fi, coming-of-age story.
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See lessAfter kidnapping the man who killed his family in a hit and run, a vengeful father’s moral debate about whether or not he should kill the man comes alive via a series of 1940s serials he listens to on his iPod.
Liked the variation where the movie plays in his head better.But either way, why not he's hunting down the man (externally) while debating the issue (internally)?? And maybe the internal moral argument consists of his editing his a film, with different endings, different dialogue to rationalize, detRead more
Liked the variation where the movie plays in his head better.
But either way, why not he’s hunting down the man (externally) while debating the issue (internally)?? And maybe the internal moral argument consists of his editing his a film, with different endings, different dialogue to rationalize, determine the various choices.?
Which ending? is ‘final cut’ that resolves his moral conflict and the external story?
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See lessWhen a naive network engineer is suddenly disconnected from global mind-meld he must find a way to reconnect before government operatives hunt him down or sickness due to disconnection kills him.
Thanks for the feedback guys, the logline structure works but the elements are way too vague. Will try again at another date. Cheers.
Thanks for the feedback guys, the logline structure works but the elements are way too vague. Will try again at another date. Cheers.
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