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A man must travel through a wormhole to save the mankind from an impending disaster on earth.
Like the Logline. Though I would like to know what kind of man he is. Perhaps age, occupation or something about his personality that defines him
Like the Logline. Though I would like to know what kind of man he is. Perhaps age, occupation or something about his personality that defines him
See lessWhen giant, man-eating plants land on the moon, a pacifist gardener must protect his moon colony.
Love the idea! By adding "pacifist" you manages do add both an obstacle to the main character and give a hint of the theme. A question when pops to mind is how the gardener is going to protect the colony, and why he is the one that must do the protecting. Since the "monsters" are plants and he's a gRead more
Love the idea! By adding “pacifist” you manages do add both an obstacle to the main character and give a hint of the theme. A question when pops to mind is how the gardener is going to protect the colony, and why he is the one that must do the protecting. Since the “monsters” are plants and he’s a gardener, wouldn’t it be interesting if he grew them instead of them landing? Maybe he tried to create a new plant that would save the colony from starving, but instead he messes up and the plants end up eating the colony instead. Just an idea.
See lessA linguist helps government to decipher an alien communication to understand their mysterious and globally alarming presence on earth.
Great job! I kind of miss the major event in the beginning of the logline instead of at the end. But it works! Also, try adding the stakes into logline, the clock ticking and/or the consequence of what happens if she doesn't succeed.
Great job! I kind of miss the major event in the beginning of the logline instead of at the end. But it works! Also, try adding the stakes into logline, the clock ticking and/or the consequence of what happens if she doesn’t succeed.
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