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Asked to help the New York City police identify a body, a geneticist believes they’ve found a Neanderthal, but when she tries to confirm her results she’s hindered at every step by her university and an influential but secretive agency.
Hi byron79, Sounds like an interesting science thriller to me, if that is what you actually aimed for. The only thing missing in this logline I think is some indication as to why the geneticist has such a burning desire to fight her employer and take on a secret agency. Is she really this desperateRead more
Hi byron79,
Sounds like an interesting science thriller to me, if that is what you actually aimed for. The only thing missing in this logline I think is some indication as to why the geneticist has such a burning desire to fight her employer and take on a secret agency. Is she really this desperate to make a name for herself, or is it somehow personal? That would make the logline even more appealing I think.
Cheers,
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A man must travel through a wormhole to save the mankind from an impending disaster on earth.
Like the Logline. Though I would like to know what kind of man he is. Perhaps age, occupation or something about his personality that defines him
Like the Logline. Though I would like to know what kind of man he is. Perhaps age, occupation or something about his personality that defines him
See lessWhen giant, man-eating plants land on the moon, a pacifist gardener must protect his moon colony.
Love the idea! By adding "pacifist" you manages do add both an obstacle to the main character and give a hint of the theme. A question when pops to mind is how the gardener is going to protect the colony, and why he is the one that must do the protecting. Since the "monsters" are plants and he's a gRead more
Love the idea! By adding “pacifist” you manages do add both an obstacle to the main character and give a hint of the theme. A question when pops to mind is how the gardener is going to protect the colony, and why he is the one that must do the protecting. Since the “monsters” are plants and he’s a gardener, wouldn’t it be interesting if he grew them instead of them landing? Maybe he tried to create a new plant that would save the colony from starving, but instead he messes up and the plants end up eating the colony instead. Just an idea.
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