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A grieving father and his teenage daughter teams up with four other cadets to stop androids from invading Earth from an evil emperor.
Sounds cool, consider the following to strengthen your logline: 1. Why a father and daughter team to save the world? What’s makes them qualified? 2. You mentioned cadets, what kind of cadets are you referring to, and can your protag father being linked as their leader or teacher – hope you see whereRead more
Sounds cool, consider the following to strengthen your logline:
1. Why a father and daughter team to save the world? What’s makes them qualified?
2. You mentioned cadets, what kind of cadets are you referring to, and can your protag father being linked as their leader or teacher – hope you see where I’m going with this.
3. Who is your baddie (emperor) and what is his goal? Think about all the Sci-Fi shows we’ve seen, what makes this emperor and his minions unique?
Keep going!
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Why would the aliens abandon an imminent victory? It makes no sense and has no relationship to the goal of stopping the extinction of the solar system. Why is the solar system going extinct anyway? Without knowing what specifically is happening, the reader will never understand the plot. What are thRead more
Why would the aliens abandon an imminent victory? It makes no sense and has no relationship to the goal of stopping the extinction of the solar system. Why is the solar system going extinct anyway? Without knowing what specifically is happening, the reader will never understand the plot. What are they actually going to do to stop the extinction of the solar system? Surely the inciting incident is actually the discovery that the solar system is going to be wiped out…?
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This is just Aliens, right? Stick it in examples if it is or you'll get a lot of people saying "this has been done before"! Hahaha!
This is just Aliens, right? Stick it in examples if it is or you’ll get a lot of people saying “this has been done before”! Hahaha!
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