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  1. Posted: July 10, 2021In: SciFi

    Every prophet assembles in Vedic woods when three missing children’s voyage inside the human brain unfolds a stunning battlefield where the devil imprisoned God for ages. A mission begins to liberate God while Buddha emerges as the last resort to unzip recession and stress from deceptive human life.

    OKBoomer Penpusher
    Added an answer on July 16, 2021 at 8:53 pm

    Who owns the mission to liberate God? Whose story is this? Reading this logline it feels like there are three stories running simultaneously.

    Who owns the mission to liberate God? Whose story is this? Reading this logline it feels like there are three stories running simultaneously.

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  2. Posted: June 4, 2021In: SciFi

    All prophets organize in Vedic woods when three missing children’s time travel with the legendary Buddha unfolds a tragic battlefield where the devil imprisoned God for ages. Buddha enters the battleground to liberate God, but evil surrenders even before the combat begin.

    Jay_Bird Penpusher
    Added an answer on July 1, 2021 at 8:07 am

    This is a really interesting concept! But it's hard to follow who the main character is and what their goal is. Is it being told by the perspective of the prophets? The children? Buddha? God? Try deciding who the main protagonist is and write it from their perspective adding in what they are specifiRead more

    This is a really interesting concept! But it’s hard to follow who the main character is and what their goal is. Is it being told by the perspective of the prophets? The children? Buddha? God?

    Try deciding who the main protagonist is and write it from their perspective adding in what they are specifically trying to do.

    Example (if the children are the main characters)
    3 adventurous children are tasked with assisting the legendary Buddha in a time travelling mission to liberate God from the Devil’s imprisonment.

    I hope this is helpful and keep going with it! 🙂

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  3. Posted: June 23, 2021In: SciFi

    A researcher discovers a group of young children who have a collective consciousness, but no one believes him, even when he learns of the children’s plan to rid the world of all those outside their group mind.

    Mike Pedley Singularity
    Added an answer on June 23, 2021 at 4:21 am

    So what's he going to do about it? This is just the first act, what happens for the duration of the 90min+ runtime? Who is this researcher? Why is he our protagonist?

    So what’s he going to do about it? This is just the first act, what happens for the duration of the 90min+ runtime?

    Who is this researcher? Why is he our protagonist?

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