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When all contact is lost with a colony on a distant planet, a space pilot who claims to have discovered a terrifying creature there must join a team of bull-headed marines to investigate.
This is just Aliens, right? Stick it in examples if it is or you'll get a lot of people saying "this has been done before"! Hahaha!
This is just Aliens, right? Stick it in examples if it is or you’ll get a lot of people saying “this has been done before”! Hahaha!
See lessEvery prophet assembles in Vedic woods when three missing children’s voyage inside the human brain unfolds a stunning battlefield where the devil imprisoned God for ages. A mission begins to liberate God while Buddha emerges as the last resort to unzip recession and stress from deceptive human life.
Who owns the mission to liberate God? Whose story is this? Reading this logline it feels like there are three stories running simultaneously.
Who owns the mission to liberate God? Whose story is this? Reading this logline it feels like there are three stories running simultaneously.
See lessAll prophets organize in Vedic woods when three missing children’s time travel with the legendary Buddha unfolds a tragic battlefield where the devil imprisoned God for ages. Buddha enters the battleground to liberate God, but evil surrenders even before the combat begin.
This is a really interesting concept! But it's hard to follow who the main character is and what their goal is. Is it being told by the perspective of the prophets? The children? Buddha? God? Try deciding who the main protagonist is and write it from their perspective adding in what they are specifiRead more
This is a really interesting concept! But it’s hard to follow who the main character is and what their goal is. Is it being told by the perspective of the prophets? The children? Buddha? God?
Try deciding who the main protagonist is and write it from their perspective adding in what they are specifically trying to do.
Example (if the children are the main characters)
3 adventurous children are tasked with assisting the legendary Buddha in a time travelling mission to liberate God from the Devil’s imprisonment.
I hope this is helpful and keep going with it! 🙂
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