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All prophets organize in Vedic woods when three missing children’s time-travel with legendary Buddha unfolds a stunning battlefield, where the devil imprisoned God for ages. As Buddha detects every believer standing with evil at the battleground, He opens his third eye and telepathically smashes each hypocritical shield to liberate God.
I love this concept. Very colourful. I can see it playing out. Would love to see it made. The greatest of light versus the greatest of darkness. "When three missing children accidentally time travel to the Bodhi tree and find the Buddha himself at the moment of enlightenment, they must take a crashRead more
I love this concept. Very colourful. I can see it playing out. Would love to see it made. The greatest of light versus the greatest of darkness.
“When three missing children accidentally time travel to the Bodhi tree and find the Buddha himself at the moment of enlightenment, they must take a crash course in spiritual surrender when they are thrust into a battle in the Vedic woods where Buddha opens his third eye to telepathically smash the devil and all hypocritical energies standing in the way of Godly peace.”
Not that yours is this, but, totally on a side note, when I was a child I was hooked on the TV show ‘Monkey’. It was Japanese, I think. Raced home in the afternoons to watch it. It followed buddhist principles in a comedic and slightly twisted way. Just seeing the buddhism on the screen attracted me. 🙂
See lessA anxious man must decrypt a disturbing, mysterious recurring dream that may hold the secret to preventing the end of the world.
Consider the following: 1. Why him? Who is this anxious protag that can save the world? 2. Why now - the dreams? 3. What is the recurring dream? E.g., death of the world via body snatchers, alien invasion – you get the idea. Elaborate on this to orientate the reader. 4. Think about your baddie's goaRead more
Consider the following:
1. Why him? Who is this anxious protag that can save the world?
2. Why now – the dreams?
3. What is the recurring dream? E.g., death of the world via body snatchers, alien invasion – you get the idea. Elaborate on this to orientate the reader.
4. Think about your baddie’s goal it may strengthen your logline E.g., revenge for the Roswell incident or like in Independence Day – planet harvesters.
Hope you find this constructive, keep going!
See lessFear of monetary demise turns the globe into a top-security prison; Buddha senses implosion; looms with a pragmatic paragon to unzip recession and stress from deceptive human life; enlightens three lost children who endure from NASA plane crash in Vedic woods.
Interesting premise, consider the following: 1. I struggle with your major event - the fifth Buddha’s return / following these three youngsters. 2. Your world is great, but who is your baddie? 3. Concerning the three youngsters, is the fifth Buddha reborn through one of them? Example: “In a collapsiRead more
Interesting premise, consider the following:
1. I struggle with your major event – the fifth Buddha’s return / following these three youngsters.
2. Your world is great, but who is your baddie?
3. Concerning the three youngsters, is the fifth Buddha reborn through one of them?
Example:
“In a collapsing global police state, a reincarnate fifth Buddha sets out to restore nirvana to the world”
I only have a basic understanding of Buddhism – maybe use my thoughts/questions as a good example of your typical reader.
Keep going, take care.
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