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A trio of mercenaries with the aid of a former spy investigate a cabal intent on global technocracy while trying to rescue her best friend from the clutches of a psychotic scientist.
Try to get the inciting incident up front and make clear what the stakes are.
Try to get the inciting incident up front and make clear what the stakes are.
See lessIn the final chapter of the trilogy, the Rhodium Golems and the 5 Elements must stand together in order to thwart Sorina Manescu’s plans to resurrect Project Athena and rule the world with an invisible hand.
Shorten your logline by focussing on the basic theme.
Shorten your logline by focussing on the basic theme.
See lessLEGION OF ONE – When a rogue AI threatens to exterminate the world’s population, a gutsy cyber agent streams into the mind of a psychotic hacker to retrieve the shutdown code. Does this logline sound like a winner?
Dig it! The logistics of a cyber (computer) agent accessing the human mind of the hacker caused me to do a double-take. It's not outside of the realm of possibility - I get he can do it virtually. Lean example: A cyberagent must infiltrate the mind of a psychotic hacker in order to shut down an AI tRead more
Dig it!
The logistics of a cyber (computer) agent accessing the human mind of the hacker caused me to do a double-take. It’s not outside of the realm of possibility – I get he can do it virtually.
Lean example:
A cyberagent must infiltrate the mind of a psychotic hacker in order to shut down an AI threatening humanity.
Keep going, take care.
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