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A ragtag team of police officers discover corruption against their town to destroy robots from taking over their planet.
What do you think of the idea?
What do you think of the idea?
See lessAn out for themselves kidnapper secures a clone designed to be an ailing businessman’s replacement body, however when the clone begins developing its own persona she must prevent him being replaced.
Cool. 1. What business and why was this clone kidnapped? 2. Is the clone defective and under recall? Keep going, take care.
Cool.
1. What business and why was this clone kidnapped?
2. Is the clone defective and under recall?
Keep going, take care.
See lessChris has been brutalized throughout the history of mankind, turned into a demon by God, he vows to stop mankind’s brutal rampage
How? Who is Chris? (other than a demon). How has he been brutalised throughout the history of mankind and why is that relevant to the story other than a bit of back-story? Will doing this turn him back to what he was? Mankind's brutal rampage against....? Without understanding all of this, I don't rRead more
How? Who is Chris? (other than a demon). How has he been brutalised throughout the history of mankind and why is that relevant to the story other than a bit of back-story? Will doing this turn him back to what he was? Mankind’s brutal rampage against….?
Without understanding all of this, I don’t really understand the story. Most demons are bad guys, so you’ve to make sure his quest is something the audience will get behind. For that we need specifics.
We really don’t need his name. I’d rather know who he is.
By telling us he was turned into a demon by God, that suggests to me his goal is to be turned back? Is that the case? If so, make it sound like the goal in the logline, if not, I’d consider removing it altogether. Just referring to him as a *insert characteristic here* demon will do the job.
I’d say this is more Fantasy than SciFi.
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