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A resourceful investigator takes a job at the most famous classified government facility known and stumbles upon a dark secret that could wipeout mankind.
If stumbling on a 'dark secret' is what sets the story in motion, then you should tell us what that dark secret is, then tell us what the lead plans on doing about it.
If stumbling on a ‘dark secret’ is what sets the story in motion, then you should tell us what that dark secret is, then tell us what the lead plans on doing about it.
See lessAfter earning a work-for-trade job in a high-tech senior home, a self-absorbed grad student must manage his assigned resident’s social media profile. Only this account does more than just posts likes and retweets, it also keeps the resident alive.
What is standing in the way of the lead character accomplishing his goal? This logline goes over the setup to the story but not what the lead character must do about it. Nor does it go over the dramatic conflict of the story. If the lead character's goal is to keep his resident alive, then there musRead more
What is standing in the way of the lead character accomplishing his goal?
This logline goes over the setup to the story but not what the lead character must do about it.
Nor does it go over the dramatic conflict of the story.
If the lead character’s goal is to keep his resident alive, then there must be someone or something who is trying to stop the resident from staying alive.
I think this is an interesting concept, and definitely something I personally haven’t seen before, but it is missing the conflict, so I am not seeing the story. Because story is conflict.
See lessKnocked out and put in cryosleep for 30 years, a space soldier wakes up only to find his wife murdered and his child gone. His search for vengeance and motives will be tested upon finding out that it was his son the one responsible for the crime.
Dig it! leaning towards: "When awakened from a 30-year cryosleep, a space solder sets out to exact vengeance against the ruthless murderer of his wife – his son." Happy New Year!
Dig it! leaning towards:
“When awakened from a 30-year cryosleep, a space solder sets out to exact vengeance against the ruthless murderer of his wife – his son.”
Happy New Year!
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